Paper

Proofread the g/f's paper. Looks a lot better than the original document(s) that she presented the first time. She had hand written it, so I typed it up for her, make easier for her to review and also easier for her professor when she turns it in. Only had to fix one or two very minor grammatical errors. Need to address with her about flow within a point using subpoints that are cohesive and dependent instead of individual and independent.


Sincerely,
Goliath